Wednesday, February 07, 2007

Haiku/Gesundheit (Volume XL)

apparently you've not caught on to the fact that when i get sick, i get really sick

i don't want your germs
but you're intent on sharing
when you cough i wince

thoughts concerning commercial hype

part i
call the police fast!
someone stole the "super" out
of "super bowl ads"

part ii
fear and violence
depression, sadness and booze
common thread for all

while i'm thinking of it

that game was boring
like watching pawns clear the brush
for a bloodless coup

i sure hope that's not a fire hazard

super space heater
shoved under a cabinet
blood pressure rises

1 comment:

XOXO said...

commercial part ii couldn't be more true.